I will developmental edit your novel to fix plot holes and hook readers
Honest, indepth feedback to strengthen your story
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Is your manuscript feeling flat, cluttered, or stuck with plot holes you just cant seem to fix? Writing a book is hard, but self-editing your own work is almost impossible. When you're too close to your story, critical pacing flaws, weak character arcs, and narrative dead ends go completely unnoticed.
Publishing an unpolished novel leads to harsh reviews, poor reader retention, and wasted months of effort. Worse, readers will abandon your book after the first few chapters if the hook isn't strong enough.
That's where I come in. My professional developmental editing service gives your novel the structural makeover it needs to shine. I provide in-depth manuscript critiques that fix plot holes, sharpen pacing, enhance world-building, and make your characters unforgettable, all while preserving your unique voice. You'll get clear, actionable track changes in MS Word plus a detailed editorial report outlining exact steps to elevate your narrative.
Turn your rough draft into an unputdownable page-turner that readers love!
Ready to make your manuscript publish-ready? Message me now with your word count and genre for a custom quote, or place your order today!
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
POV:
First person
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Second person
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Can I message you before ordering?
Yes! Please contact me so I can give you a personalized quote.
Will developmental editing change my writing style or original voice?
Not at all. My goal is to enhance your story, not rewrite it in my voice. I point out plot holes, pacing issues, and character inconsistencies, giving you actionable suggestions on how to fix them while keeping your unique tone, style, and creative vision 100% intact.
How is this different from proofreading?
Developmental editing fixes plot holes, story structure, and pacing. Proofreading only fixes grammar and typos. I ensure your story works before fine-tuning words.
What if my book exceeds package word limits?
No problem! Click "Contact Me" with your exact word count and genre, and I’ll send a custom offer tailored to your manuscript size and timeline.
Can I see a sample edit before ordering?
Yes! Message me with a short sample (up to 1,000 words) and I will provide a brief sample edit so you can see my feedback style before committing.
What files will I receive upon delivery?
You'll get two files: your manuscript with MS Word Track Changes for inline feedback, plus a detailed Editorial Report summarizing plot, pacing, and character insights.

