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I will developmental book edit your ya and adult novel
Structural and Developmental book editor
As not only a freelance editor but also a fellow Author currently under publication, I look forward to nothing more than extending my expertise to those in my community whose penmanship could use a mo...
About this Gig
My Structural book editing service delivers fine touches for 'big picture' improvements to your manuscript. With a focused attention on Narrative voice, consistency, and tone, I help organize the coherence & flow of your storytelling. Every fix, along with each personal recommendation, is thoroughly explained in an assessment, notes, and/or my thorough review (Premium trademark Critique).
Key milestones are:
- Sentence-level revisions focusing on style, flow, clarity, and voice.
- Review plot, pacing, motivation, setting, character development, and consistency.
- Offer detailed suggestions and notated feedback.
"What makes me different than other beta readers?"
Is because I know what you're going through, and I know what it takes to breathe life into sheets of paper. What you're doing isn't easy, nor should you do it alone. Everyone has a story to tell, and I want to help yours be the best that it can be.
I like to create a unique experience with each author, providing hard truths and honest feedback while also being encouraging where I see moments of brilliance. My reports are in-depth, leaving nothing to interpretation.
Language:
English
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Passive
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Can I sample your work?
Yes, message me for a scheduled assessment and have the first 4 pages of your manuscript ready. The service will be the minimum $5.00 fee. (Samples will be subject for free use in my portfolio.)
What is "The Ultimate Critique?"
The Ultimate Critique is a Thorough and full review of your manuscript, where I will explain what I feel works in your story, and doesn't. Each critique will come with examples and my personal suggestion. This service however, only comes with the 'Premium' package.
How do revisions requests/submissions work.
The revisions are largely focused on Structural editing, and will only costs $60.00. However, the window for revisions will only last 30 days after the date of order completion. Outside that time frame, the price a& service return to default & base price. (Limited to 1 Revision request per package.)
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D dngdavis
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I enjoyed working with this provider. Communication was clear, and I was kept up to date on the progress. I felt the final result far exceeded my expectations. The provider came through on all promises. I got exceptional value for my money and would, without question, use this provider again. Super experience!
$200-$400
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2 weeks
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arifoxx
Canada
Glad I decided to give Sinn a try! He worked on my manuscript, an early draft btw, and gave amazing suggestions, notes, and feedback. I haven’t worked with many editors, and really have only been interested in just finding the one or two I can stick with for this book, and maybe even those to come. So...
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D dngdavis
United States
I enjoyed working with this provider. Communication was clear, and I was kept up to date on the progress. I felt the final result far exceeded my expectations. The provider came through on all promises. I got exceptional value for my money and would, without question, use this provider again. Super experience!
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?A arifoxx
Canada
Glad I decided to give Sinn a try! He worked on my manuscript, an early draft btw, and gave amazing suggestions, notes, and feedback. I haven’t worked with many editors, and really have only been interested in just finding the one or two I can stick with for this book, and maybe even those to come. So...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
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