I will extensively beta read from a developmental perspective

Pakistan

I speak English

1 order completed

Professional Translation, Writing and Creative Support

I provide expert, human-powered services for translation, writing, and literary support, including English → Japanese translation for manga and anime, non-judgmental listening sessions, ATS resumes fo...
About this Gig

Two sets of eyes. Two reactions to your current writing project. One fee. 


Ready to take the plunge and get some constructive feedback on your manuscript? Want an honest opinion on what is working and what isn't? Curious if your humor reads funny or if your murder mystery is suspenseful enough?


We are avid readers of most things fiction with years of teaching, editing, beta experience. We have joined forces to provide a best friends beta team to offer you a unique service.


We include inline commentary throughout the manuscript regarding: plot, characters, pacing, setting, etc. We will also let you know when passages read rough or fluidly, things we loved and those parts that missed the mark.


My unique blend of technical precision and creative insight means I see both the forest and the trees, and I focus on:

  • character arcs
  • plot holes
  • dialogue pacing
  • structure
  • readability
  • plausibility
  • and many more!


A follow up overall report will give a larger impression of your work hitting the big picture items: strength of intro, major plot holes, character relevance, any questions we have, and what works best in your writing.


We are accepting fiction reads. Our favorite genres are Romance

Genre:

Adventure

Business management

Children’s books

Education

Language:

English

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