Vivian Ayumi

Vivian provided an excellent Beta Review of my novel. She pointed out positive aspects and inconsistencies in a detailed report. She also closely followed my brief by answering specific questions on story arc, structure, and characters. Great work!

Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,... See more

Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments... See more

Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit... See more

I was absolutely thrilled with the report. I could tell she actually read the manuscript and gave so many helpful pointers I couldn’t see reading it myself. The report was detailed, enthusiastic and a really helpful mix of positives and suggestions to improve. Thank you!