Vivian Ayumi

Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.

Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the depth of the feedback, but how carefully she understood the emotional themes, symbolism, pacing, and atmosphere of the story. Her comments went... See more

Vivian's insight into the first manuscript of my novel was very insightful. She pointed out in immense detail of what was working and what needed further development in my novel. I will definitely be back and use her service when I am done writing the second novel of my book series. I would definitely... See more

Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me such valuable insight into my manuscript, especially in areas of pacing, emotional impact, and scene development. I really appreciated how much... See more

Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!