Vivian Ayumi

Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful... See more

Vivian provided an excellent Beta Review of my novel. She pointed out positive aspects and inconsistencies in a detailed report. She also closely followed my brief by answering specific questions on story arc, structure, and characters. Great work!

Vivian's insight into the first manuscript of my novel was very insightful. She pointed out in immense detail of what was working and what needed further development in my novel. I will definitely be back and use her service when I am done writing the second novel of my book series. I would definitely... See more

Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,... See more

Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments... See more