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I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently an English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedback to help polish and ...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
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Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
environmolds
United States
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
Mexico
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Netherlands
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canada
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
United States
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
About this Gig
Orders are open! Please, DM me and I will send you my reports structure!
NO AI USED! 100%-vetted, detailed structural analysis!
I'm a passionate reader and experienced beta reader specializing in romance, dark, fantasy, thriller, historical, supernatural, isekai, LitRPG and erotica stories. I know how readers feel, what keeps them turning pages, and what makes them put a book down.
My goal is to deliver an honest report about the reading experience, find inconsistencies and give you suggestions on how to fix them.
I offer detailed, honest, and emotionally grounded feedback to help you improve:
- Plot and Structure
- Pacing
- Readability
- Character development
- Emotional Depth
- Plot holes and Inconsistencies (+suggestions)
- Overall feedback
- Q&A
What youll receive:
- A clear, organized feedback report (PDF)
- Summary of whats working and what needs polishing
My feedback is honest, respectful, and constructive. Im here to help you shape your manuscript into its best version, whether its a spicy romance or a deep emotional fantasy.
Let's make your story shine!
Language:
English
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Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Which format shoud I send my manuscript?
Preferably Word or PDF, but I accept other formats too.
Do you write in-line comments?
Unfortunately, I don’t work with in-line commentary anymore. I provide the in-depth analysis by writing you a report.
What is the length of the report I will receive?
It depends on the length of your manuscript. But here’s a simplified preview: - Simple package (up to 5,000 words manuscripts): around 4-5 pages - Intermediate package: (up to 50,000 words manuscripts) around 6-7 pages - Premium package (up to 100,000 words manuscripts): around 9-10 pages
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely! I will not share, by any means, your manuscript with anyone.
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F fblackthorn
Portugal
Vivian did an amazing job! She’s the first beta reader I’m paying and I was a bit apprehensive, however she’s amazing and goes above and beyond with her work. I really recommend her!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B bcmeyer_13
United States
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
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jalynn07
United States
Vivian was AMAZING to work with! She was very detailed and thorough. I can tell she actually read the book. She picked up on themes and pointed out very helpful areas of confusion and plot holes and points. I would absolutely work with her again.
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T therealnishil
United States
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?G geoffroes
Australia
Thank you Vivian, I found your feedback hits where I thought it would, as my manuscript requires outside perspective to improve upon. I feel fortunate to have had an avid and honest reader in you, and thank you again.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
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112 reviews for this Gig
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F fblackthorn
Portugal
Vivian did an amazing job! She’s the first beta reader I’m paying and I was a bit apprehensive, however she’s amazing and goes above and beyond with her work. I really recommend her!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?B bcmeyer_13
United States
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?J jalynn07
United States
Vivian was AMAZING to work with! She was very detailed and thorough. I can tell she actually read the book. She picked up on themes and pointed out very helpful areas of confusion and plot holes and points. I would absolutely work with her again.
$100-$200
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?T therealnishil
United States
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?G geoffroes
Australia
Thank you Vivian, I found your feedback hits where I thought it would, as my manuscript requires outside perspective to improve upon. I feel fortunate to have had an avid and honest reader in you, and thank you again.
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?
