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Vivian Ayumi
@vivian_ayumi
Level 2
Brazil
English, Portuguese
About me
Hello! My name is Vivian Ayumi and I am currently a Medical student, former English teacher and avid reader with a passion for diving deep into stories. I’m here to provide honest, constructive feedback to help polish and perfect your manuscript. Let’s make your story shine!
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Vivian Ayumi
$60/hour
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Average response time: 2 hours
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Beta Reading
I will beta read your fantasy, romance, historical, dark, thriller or erotica book
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English Teacher
Pearson • Part-time
Aug 2024 - Jul 2025 • 11 mos
For about one year I worked as an English Teacher, teaching children, teenager and adults.
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melkaven
United States
Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit...
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kaypro1221
United States
Ongoing collaboration
Vivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
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elle_myren
United States
Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts...
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adri_writer
United States
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
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jo_wu_author
United States
Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.
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