I will line edit your short story or single chapter

United Kingdom

I speak English

Fiction line editor: voice, flow, clarity

I'm a line editor with a reader's instinct and a writer's eye — I read widely across contemporary and literary fiction, and I'm currently editing my own novel, so I know first-hand how much a second p...
About this Gig

I'm a line editor with a reader's instinct and a writer's eye. I read widely across contemporary and literary fiction, and I'm currently editing my own novel, so I know firsthand how much a second pair of eyes changes a piece of writing.

I specialise in short stories and single chapters (up to 8,000 words), perfect if you want focused, detailed feedback without committing to a full-manuscript edit.

What I focus on:

️ Sentence-level flow and rhythm

️ Voice consistency

️ Pacing and clarity

️ Cutting anything that gets between your reader and the story

You'll get tracked changes plus margin comments explaining why something isn't working, not just what to change.

One round of follow-up revisions is included if anything needs to be adjusted after you review. Need an extra round beyond that? Add the additional revision extra at checkout.

Comfortable working with both US and UK spelling/style; just let me know your preference when you order.

Language:

English

Content type:

Short story

Manuscript

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Delivery style preference

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