I will beta read your book and give you extensive feedback and corrections
Gig Summary
Your reliable and affordable betareader, proofreader and editor!
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
chelseaderuyter

United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught...
tv_holiday

United States
I always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have...
karissaleelee

United States
Really thorough with a lot to consider against my first manuscript. Really appreciate the support and level of attention to detail. I've hired quite a few fiverr...
jonah_books

United States
It's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
kyleturner447

Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
About this Gig
Questions I would answer for your manuscript:
- Did the story grip me from the very beginning? If not, why?
- Were some parts of the story confusing and why?
- What did I think about the setting?
- Were your characters authentic and could I relate to them?
- Was there a point where the story dragged? If yes, how can you improve it?
- Was the pacing and tempo of the story good?
- Did the dialogue sound natural to me?
- Was the ending satisfying?
- Does the writing style suit the genre/target audience?
What does Character Analysis include:
/if you want me to analyze all your characters in-depth/
- Analyze the character arc and narrative function of each character;
- Suggesting possible improvements to make sure your characters are authentic;
Why choose me?:
- I promise to provide fast, honest, and detailed feedback;
- I promise extensive and in-depth line-edits throughout your whole work.
- I promise to provide affordable service;
- I promise to help you get one step closer to achieving your dream! :)
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
How would you give feedback on my work?
For every story/novel I work on, I use in-line comments to both express all my impressions and thoughts so you can see the reader's first reaction, and to suggest any corrections and improvements. At the end of the text, you get an extensive report with overall feedback and further comments.
Do you also correct any grammar/ spelling issues?
Yes, every time I spot a grammatical mistake, a spelling slip-up, or just a typo, I always leave this as an in-line comment so you can later go back and correct it. As well as that, I also try to spot any repetitions and suggest possible alternatives to avoid them.
Do you only work with fiction?
No. I work with all genres of stories and novels, short story collections, non-fiction works, memoirs, and self-help books. If in doubt whether your text is something that I can work with, please don't hesitate to contact me and we can talk about it.
My word count is different, what can I do?
I often work with custom offers, so if you think your word count does not necessarily fit in any of the categories or needs more explanation than simply adding up the word count, send me a message and we will find what work work best together. :)
837 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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C chelseaderuyter

United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T tv_holiday

United States
Ongoing collaborationI always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have made me a better writer. Thank you Yoanna for being consistent and taking the time to truly review my work.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K karissaleelee

United States
Really thorough with a lot to consider against my first manuscript. Really appreciate the support and level of attention to detail. I've hired quite a few fiverr beta readers and this was one of the best deliveries!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
jonah_books

United States
Ongoing collaborationIt's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K 
kyleturner447

Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?
837 reviews for this Gig
| (808) | ||
| (26) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
C chelseaderuyter

United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T tv_holiday

United States
Ongoing collaborationI always appreciate Yoanna’s feedback. She goes through the story, no matter how big, and points out everything. I can honestly say that her critiques have made me a better writer. Thank you Yoanna for being consistent and taking the time to truly review my work.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K karissaleelee

United States
Really thorough with a lot to consider against my first manuscript. Really appreciate the support and level of attention to detail. I've hired quite a few fiverr beta readers and this was one of the best deliveries!
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
jonah_books

United States
Ongoing collaborationIt's always a joy to work with Yoanna. Her feedback is very thorough, constructive, and encouraging. She's truly a wonderful human being.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?K 
kyleturner447

Australia
Yoanna is a pro. I could instantly tell that she loves to read and appreciates the craft of storytelling. A joy to work with and very much appreciated her feedback and ideas.
$50-$100
Price
7 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?

