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I will beta read your book and give you extensive feedback and corrections
Your reliable and affordable betareader, proofreader and editor!
As an avid reader and aspiring author, I bring my passion for literature to my work as a freelance betareader, proofreader, and editor.
With a First Class Honours Degree in MA Literature and Creativ...
Buyers keep returning
Yoanna has an exceptional number of repeat buyers
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
hana_hahm
United States
I love working with Yoanna! The comments are so accurate and point out ways to improve my writing I never even realized. I can tell my novel is going to the...
chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught...
rightnow52
United States
Yoanna gave me incredibly detailed line by line analysis and heartfelt feedback on my novel. Her report demonstrated her complete grasp of the story and the...
typicalcatie155
Japan
Yoanna gave me such a thorough and honest review! She gave me positive feedback and also pointed out areas where I could improve my writing. I will definitely be using Yoanna's services again in the future!
valentina_linn
United States
Yoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she...
About this Gig
Questions I would answer for your manuscript:
- Did the story grip me from the very beginning? If not, why?
- Were some parts of the story confusing and why?
- What did I think about the setting?
- Were your characters authentic and could I relate to them?
- Was there a point where the story dragged? If yes, how can you improve it?
- Was the pacing and tempo of the story good?
- Did the dialogue sound natural to me?
- Was the ending satisfying?
- Does the writing style suit the genre/target audience?
What does Character Analysis include:
/if you want me to analyze all your characters in-depth/
- Analyze the character arc and narrative function of each character;
- Suggesting possible improvements to make sure your characters are authentic;
Why choose me?:
- I promise to provide fast, honest, and detailed feedback;
- I promise extensive and in-depth line-edits throughout your whole work.
- I promise to provide affordable service;
- I promise to help you get one step closer to achieving your dream! :)
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
My Portfolio
FAQ
How would you give feedback on my work?
For every story/novel I work on, I use in-line comments to both express all my impressions and thoughts so you can see the reader's first reaction, and to suggest any corrections and improvements. At the end of the text, you get an extensive report with overall feedback and further comments.
Do you also correct any grammar/ spelling issues?
Yes, every time I spot a grammatical mistake, a spelling slip-up, or just a typo, I always leave this as an in-line comment so you can later go back and correct it. As well as that, I also try to spot any repetitions and suggest possible alternatives to avoid them.
Do you only work with fiction?
No. I work with all genres of stories and novels, short story collections, non-fiction works, memoirs, and self-help books. If in doubt whether your text is something that I can work with, please don't hesitate to contact me and we can talk about it.
My word count is different, what can I do?
I often work with custom offers, so if you think your word count does not necessarily fit in any of the categories or needs more explanation than simply adding up the word count, send me a message and we will find what work work best together. :)
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834 reviews for this Gig
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hana_hahm
Repeat Client
United States
I love working with Yoanna! The comments are so accurate and point out ways to improve my writing I never even realized. I can tell my novel is going to the next level with this book and I will definitely come back to work with her again!
$600-$800
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?C chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?R rightnow52
United States
Yoanna gave me incredibly detailed line by line analysis and heartfelt feedback on my novel. Her report demonstrated her complete grasp of the story and the characters. However, her emotional reactions and support of the writing gave me confidence and inspiration to continue to hone the book further....
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T typicalcatie155
Japan
Yoanna gave me such a thorough and honest review! She gave me positive feedback and also pointed out areas where I could improve my writing. I will definitely be using Yoanna's services again in the future!
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?V valentina_linn
Repeat Client
United States
Yoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she picks up on layers that many readers would miss. Beyond the craft, she is genuinely kind and accommodating and went out of her way to deliver early...
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
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Reviews
834 reviews for this Gig
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| (26) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (1) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
H hana_hahm
Repeat Client
United States
I love working with Yoanna! The comments are so accurate and point out ways to improve my writing I never even realized. I can tell my novel is going to the next level with this book and I will definitely come back to work with her again!
$600-$800
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?C chelseaderuyter
United States
I am so thankful for Yoanna. The work she did is going to make my book so much better, I can tell already. I felt like she understood my book and even caught on to the little things, I wasn't sure if anyone would notice. I loved her way of giving feedback and how easy she is to communicate with. All...
$400-$600
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?R rightnow52
United States
Yoanna gave me incredibly detailed line by line analysis and heartfelt feedback on my novel. Her report demonstrated her complete grasp of the story and the characters. However, her emotional reactions and support of the writing gave me confidence and inspiration to continue to hone the book further....
$600-$800
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?T typicalcatie155
Japan
Yoanna gave me such a thorough and honest review! She gave me positive feedback and also pointed out areas where I could improve my writing. I will definitely be using Yoanna's services again in the future!
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?V valentina_linn
Repeat Client
United States
Yoanna consistently delivers exceptional quality! Her understanding of psychological dynamics, narrative tension, and symbolism is remarkably sharp and she picks up on layers that many readers would miss. Beyond the craft, she is genuinely kind and accommodating and went out of her way to deliver early...
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Y Seller's Response
Helpful?
