I will fix plot holes, scene level analysis,character arc, fiction developmental editor
Turning Manuscripts Into Market Ready Books
About this Gig
Your story deserves more than basic proofreading. If your manuscript has plot holes, weak pacing, inconsistent characters, or scenes that lack emotional impact, I'm here to help transform it into a compelling, reader-focused story.
As a fiction developmental editor, I provide detailed story analysis designed to strengthen your manuscript from the inside out. I will identify structural issues, improve scene flow, enhance character arcs, and help create a more immersive reading experience.
My services include:
- Plot hole fixing
- Scene-by-scene analysis
- Character arc development
- Story pacing improvement
- Dialogue and tension feedback
- Story structure critique
- Fiction manuscript evaluation
I work with fantasy, romance, mystery, thriller, sci-fi, YA, literary fiction, and more.
Whether youre a first-time author or experienced writer, you'll receive honest, actionable feedback to help elevate your story and keep readers engaged from beginning to end.
Send me a message before ordering so we can discuss your manuscript goals and choose the best package for your project.
Language:
English
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French
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German
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Portuguese
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Spanish
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Other Book Editing Services I Offer
FAQ
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on improving the structure, pacing, plot, scenes, and character development of your story rather than grammar-only corrections.
Do you work with unfinished manuscripts?
Yes. I can review outlines, drafts, completed manuscripts, or individual chapters.
What genres do you edit?
I work with fantasy, romance, thriller, mystery, sci-fi, YA, literary fiction, adventure, and more.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. This gig focuses on developmental feedback, story analysis, and actionable editing suggestions to help improve your manuscript.
Do you provide line editing or proofreading?
This gig is focused on developmental editing. If you need line editing or proofreading, please message me before ordering.

